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Control Narrative Pacing
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EL.237 Control Narrative Pacing
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Draft paragraph: 'The narrator tells every detail of walking home before finding a lost wallet on the sidewalk.' Which revision best improves narrative pace?
A
Add more details about each step, corner, tree, car, dog, house, and street sign before the wallet.
B
Condense the walk home, then slow down when the narrator notices the wallet half-hidden beside the curb.
C
Remove the wallet because walking home happens for a longer time.
D
Explain why sidewalks are used by pedestrians before the wallet appears.
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