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Revise a Narrative for Coherence and Style
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EL.240 Revise a Narrative for Coherence and Style
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Read the draft: The garden grew. I helped Grandma. We were happy. Which revision improves style and rhythm?
A
The garden grew, I helped Grandma, and we were happy in the garden.
B
Gardens can grow in summer, and grandmothers can be happy with helpers.
C
The garden was grown by us and happiness was had by Grandma and me.
D
By July, the garden had climbed the fence, and Grandma and I carried tomatoes inside with dirt still under our nails.
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