Read the two original excerpts. Text 1: In an antique shop, Lionel refuses to sell clocks that have stopped at dawn. The narration lingers on hands fixed at pale six, making the gesture feel deliberate rather than incidental. Text 2: In a quiet bedroom, a dawn-lyric speaker envies a clock immune to morning. The passage turns on a stopped clock by the bed, an image that concentrates the speaker's conflict. A student's draft argues that Text 1 and Text 2 both dramatize suspended beginnings, but the paragraph uses Text 2 only to repeat Text 1's point. Which revision would most improve the comparative use of evidence without flattening the texts?