Read the following passage from a draft essay.
First paragraph: A scholarship required applicants to complete a minimum number of credits each term. The policy applied the same number to full-time and part-time students.
Second paragraph: [The rule appeared neutral, in practice it excluded many part-time students.] The committee considered replacing the fixed number with a percentage requirement.
Which revision is most appropriate in context? The revision must preserve the passage's point about part-time scholarship rule.