AW.033 Delete Irrelevant Information
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Read the multiparagraph draft. Paragraph 1: A farmers market is considering shade tents over the waiting area used by customers at the busiest entrance. The passage is being revised for development and focus, with the aim to show that shade would make summer entry lines safer and more comfortable. Second paragraph: The tents would cover the portion of the line exposed to direct afternoon sun. [Bracketed material: Several vendors wear aprons in colors that match their stall signs.] Weighted bases would keep the structures stable without blocking the walkway. Market staff would remove the tents during high-wind warnings. Which revision decision best aligns the bracketed material with the writer's purpose?