Read the draft passage. Paragraph 1: [1] The writer is revising a proposal about a small study kiosk at the train station. [2] A study kiosk would let commuters use waiting time for short academic tasks. [3] Students often arrive early to avoid missing an infrequent train and then sit without a table. Paragraph 2: [4] The design must not narrow passenger circulation or block visibility. [5] The kiosk could provide a counter, charging outlets, and a shield from platform noise, and this would again mean that the kiosk would turn some station waiting time into usable study time. [6] The transit agency could install one unit and observe use at different times. In the proposed discussion of a small study kiosk at the train station, which revision of sentence 5 preserves the new information but removes the second clause's repeated conclusion?