Read the draft passage.
[Paragraph 1] (1) A report on a community workshop explains its goals, attendance, and participant feedback. (2) Each paragraph serves a clear function. (3) The conclusion accurately identifies one improvement for the next session.
[Paragraph 2] (4) One sentence reads, “Participants practiced interviewing they also reviewed sample résumés.” (5) The fused clauses obscure two distinct activities. (6) The writer wants a local sentence-boundary correction.
Which revision best corrects the sentence?