AW.005 Global versus Local Revision
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Read the draft passage. [Paragraph 1] (1) A report on a community workshop explains its goals, attendance, and participant feedback. (2) Each paragraph serves a clear function. (3) The conclusion accurately identifies one improvement for the next session. [Paragraph 2] (4) One sentence reads, “Participants practiced interviewing they also reviewed sample résumés.” (5) The fused clauses obscure two distinct activities. (6) The writer wants a local sentence-boundary correction. Which revision best corrects the sentence?