Complete this revision decision for a multiparagraph draft. The preceding paragraph provides this context: A revision memo records two comments an editor made at different points in a report. The next paragraph begins with: The editor wrote Clarify the evidence and later added Shorten the conclusion. The following sentence explains how the writer applied both comments. The writer's goal is a revision that uses two separate direct quotations, each clearly attached to its source. Which revision clearly distinguishes both sources' exact words in the draft beginning with [The editor wrote Clarify the evidence and later added Shorten...]?