AW.152 Repair Overloaded Sentences
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Review the passage and the sentence marked for revision. Paragraph A: A placement review identified a confusing essay prompt. [Sentence 2] Dean Morales, who chaired the placement review, explained that the essay prompt had confused several applicants, and she recommended revising the instructions before the next cycle, which the faculty senate approved unanimously. Paragraph B: The revised instructions were tested with a small group of readers. The writer wants to make clear that the prompt problem, the recommendation, and the senate's approval each have clear subjects. Which revision of sentence 2 best accomplishes this goal while preserving the passage's meaning and using complete, well-coordinated sentences?