Review spreadsheet for Noah's four recent practice essays, including one on local journalism grants: 6 missed diagnostic items came from drafts that writes detailed sample sentences in notes but leaves no time to build coherent paragraphs; 2 misses came from ordinary editing slips; and 1 miss came from a misunderstood answer choice. Noah wants one priority plan for the recurring pattern rather than a generic review. Which plan best diagnoses the cause, targets the right strand, and checks transfer?