A tutor reviews this weak draft about tagging contaminated recycling bins: The sanitation department should use feedback tags on contaminated recycling bins before issuing fines. In a trial, tagged bins showed fewer repeated contamination problems in the following pickup cycle. The writer could add meeting comments, staff anecdotes, and several possible comparisons. Therefore, the claim is settled. Which coaching note would most directly improve evidence-to-analysis balance? Focus on proportional development: enough evidence to be concrete, enough analysis to make the inference clear.