AW.071 Paragraph Division and Combination
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Two paragraphs in a draft are both underdeveloped. Paragraph 1: The essay will use the criterion of workable access. Paragraph 2: Workable access means that central shelters give residents a known place during severe weather, but it must also account for the concern that construction funds could crowd out other local needs. Paragraph 3 then begins the first full body paragraph by applying the criterion to the policy to build storm shelters at community centers. Which edit best strengthens cohesion?