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A coastal-planning paragraph states: 'Even a casual observer can see that the proposed seawall only shifts erosion down the shoreline.' Which revision avoids condescension and improves precision?
A
The environmental assessment indicates that the seawall could redirect wave energy and accelerate erosion on adjacent shoreline segments.
B
The seawall unquestionably transfers all erosion to every adjacent property.
C
Anyone who looks at the coast can see that the seawall just moves the problem elsewhere.
D
Only a willfully inattentive reader could miss the wall's effect on neighboring beaches.
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