AW.084 Sentence Variety, Rhythm and Emphasis
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Draft excerpt: A rule that employees cannot understand will not guide conduct. A rule that supervisors apply differently will not produce fairness. A rule that no one enforces will not protect the public. The writer wants to retain some repetition because it supports a three-part test. Which revision best balances purposeful repetition with concision?