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Revision, Editing, and Polishing
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British & World Literature
12.31 Revision, Editing, and Polishing
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Draft sentence: 'He revised the paragraph carefully, trimming extra words, and the tone became more direct.'
Which revision best improves clarity by fixing the faulty coordination?
A
He revised the paragraph carefully, trimming extra words, and the tone became more direct, and it improved.
B
He revised the paragraph carefully and trimming extra words; the tone became more direct.
C
He revised the paragraph carefully, trimming extra words; and the tone became more direct.
D
He revised the paragraph carefully, trimming extra words; as a result, the tone became more direct.
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