8.55 Strengthen Writing via Revision & Feedback
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Draft: 'The rehearsal was long. The rehearsal was exhausting. The rehearsal helped us perform better.' Peer-review note: Reduce repetition and show the relationship among the ideas.

Which revision best improves style and clarity?