6.68 Relevant Evidence & Elaboration
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A student claims that using a respectful tone makes a complaint letter more effective. In her first draft about noisy lunches, she wrote, “The cafeteria is awful and everyone is rude.” In her revised draft, she wrote, “Lunchtime can be very loud, and it’s hard for some students to concentrate afterward.” The assistant principal replied to the revised letter and invited her to a meeting.

Which evidence best supports the claim about effectiveness?